Comments about Patrick’s photos:

Comments about Patrick’s photos: 

I think he did a great job. Despite the fact that his camera betrayed him at the beginning, but he could produce a good collection in a short time including the questions and answers of people he took pictures of.  In his first picture, I think that it would be better is his dimed the background a little bit so we can see the person more clearer than he looks. I don’t mean by that, that the background wasn’t important, but it has lots of light that make it very bright and making the guy face appear brighter in the right side more than the lift side.  He also didn’t crop the guy hand in the picture neither he made it completely appear.  His second and fourth pictures were his best pictures, and it would be better if he reduced focusing in the background especially for the second picture. The third picture has an issue of cropping the guy hair and the window in the background is not important to appear in this picture.  He made the guy ‘s face in the top of the picture and made the rest of his body appear more than his face. The fifth picture had to be dimmed a little bit, we can see lots of light on the girl’s body and her t-shirt, and the reflection of the window is making some noise too. In general, all of his work was great but he has some issues of fixing the levels of colors of some pictures and in cropping some of them or if it wasn’t in cropping them it would be in framing them.